 the blower's daughter 2009-11-30 . chapter 14Ike, the firther Seppy falls for you, the further I fall for you :D I just think that Poe and Seppy belong together, but I love that she has two attractive men fighting over her, just like it should be! It's great as ever, beautiful :3 |
 sleep in the dark 2009-11-30 . chapter 14holly fuck holly fuck holly fuck! i dont know what to say! i loved it! okok i said i would kick ur ass iff u didnt update sonow im not going to kick ur sorry ass! wow i think im in love with u! ok all i want in the next chapter is to learn a little more about ike and sep's past relationship, more details on ryan (that Bastard),ike, and poe's past relationship, & for the chappy to be a bit longer. ok is that doable? i love u i might be in love! ok update soon! |
 AlphaBeatKayGee 2009-11-29 . chapter 14Well shucks!! That was cute as hell!! They're just effin adorable...and then there's Poe. I don't even know what's going on...but I don't mean that in the literal sense. Anyhow! Now what?! That was a big emotional intake. What is wrong with parents now-a-days. So uh..till next chapter then! Btw Thanks for recognition and I'm glad you got you're mojo back! |
 dreamercrys 2009-11-29 . chapter 14You got me all in a tizzy now... I don't know who to pick... Triangles are the best and worst... They all share so much hurt and heartache that it is going to be very very hard to choose... |
 professormandy 2009-11-29 . chapter 14Yay, more goodies.
I saw a few "your"s where there should have been "you're"s, but other than that, great. |
 A.Rua 2009-11-29 . chapter 14Oh man, September's just made things so much worse haha. I have to say though, Ike's so sweet, and he understands September better than anyone. But at the same time, she was so in love with Poe, and they finally made things right between them. This is gonna be one hard journey :) |
 the blower's daughter 2009-11-29 . chapter 13Yet again, another great chapter. I love it when our boys defend Seppy's honor- it's just so southern and manly and I love it. I'm from the South, so that's a relatable thing lol and just let Ike know I'm here for him lol I can message you my specifics :D I hope you're not losing steam, cause I don't usually stick with stories, but this one is just so relatable and funny and fantastic, as are you ;3 |
 book-geek 2009-11-29 . chapter 13good chapter , not as much happened as i would have liked , but it was still good (: i hope u do keep updating this story! |
 cat10985 2009-11-29 . chapter 13 ok.. so i have been reading this from the beginning and i have always L-O-V-E-D it. but i never review because i like being in the shadows.. haha. but since u need love to keep the story going i will show my love for the story. i really want you to continue with it! i am so torn with who seppy should be with. Ike or Poe. i like them both although i like how Ike treats her a lot more than Poe does. blah.. you have to make one of them turn in to a jerk so i can dislike one. but i dont know who. you decide. Well that is all i have to say. keep writing! it is great! and i hope some more steamy chapters will be coming up soon! |
 Cupcakexsparkle 2009-11-29 . chapter 13Very well written. Also, the ending made me well up a lil' bit. Plus, September has amazing taste in music! :D I love 30 Seconds To Mars' song Kings of Queens. It's like my crack. But anyways, good job! ^.^ |
 sleep in the dark 2009-11-29 . chapter 13OK here is Ur love! i really enjoy this story... so can u please write more? OK lets put it this way if u don't write more i will whoop Ur sorry ass! (well verbally anyway! maybe i will actually kick Ur ass if i meet u on the street some day OK so u need to continue this story! dig?) |
 dreamercrys 2009-11-29 . chapter 13Wow... Can't anyone say love triangle? Cuz there is def going to be one soon... And between two brothers...things are gonna get a little ugly, especially because Sep loves them both... Can't wait for more! :D |
 Goo Goo records 2009-11-29 . chapter 13 Great chappie felt the emotions pretty clear. As for grammar errors we all make them and what was up With Poe, laying a big one on Seppy like that? I feel like he was trying to show everyone that she was his... and Ike calling him out on his possesiveness was brilliant and shows that he's paying attention way more than Poe thinks. Yeehaw! |
 Asanine 2009-11-29 . chapter 13 Good chapter, did seem a lil rushed though. At least to me, but it still was good. |
 professormandy 2009-11-29 . chapter 13Yay for awesomeness! What next? |