|Reviews for Across the Universe|
| enviousxbeauty 11/18/09 . chapter 1
Aww that's really sweet. Great job!
| YohKo Bennington 10/18/09 . chapter 1
Aw! so cute and romantic!
| give me november 10/18/09 . chapter 1
I’ll be banished at morning
But I’ll be here waiting
For you across
my favorite line! i really liked this. the only thing i'd change is the first line, where you used fall/fallen twice. other than that, this was a wonderful piece with a very original idea. besides, i love poems about the universe and constelations:)
| Mirabella 10/18/09 . chapter 1
This is lovely!