Aww that's really sweet. Great job!

Aw! so cute and romantic!

YohKo B.

I’ll be banished at morning

But I’ll be here waiting

For you across

The universe.

my favorite line! i really liked this. the only thing i'd change is the first line, where you used fall/fallen twice. other than that, this was a wonderful piece with a very original idea. besides, i love poems about the universe and constelations:)

yours, always

willow

This is lovely!