Interesting, but why does that one girl act like a child? This would be better if you described what the place looked like, what the main girl looked like, that sort of thing.

jeez what a brat, and she tried to give her meth! honestly, someone needs to slap some intellegence into her! lol *slap slap slap

Another great chapter! You're giving us just enough information, but not too much so that we stay hooked! It's like a drug! haha

Loved it, update soon!

I really, really hope she's able to escape from those horrible people, she deserves better than that.
Can't wait for more :)

I love your story so far. Will we find out why she was kidnapped soon? They clearly know who she is.
And onto other things - I can't believe a guy could be so obnoxious, good luck with the next few days and I hope you knock some sense into him and his friends (not physically). It seems like his ego needs to be brought down a few notches.
Anyways, I can't wait to read more of your story, please update soon :)

Well...I really like this story so far! It immediately grabs your attention and keeps you wondering.
Update soon! Thanks for the good read.

awesome new chapter,
funny how that woman tried to kinky with him and was turned down flat lol. (at least has some fun not in then lol)
keep going!

Loved it, update soon!

Great chapter once again! Loved it!

Very interesting, a sex-slave house?? Not sure what is going on here. Hopefully that guy who said you peeped in on him will get what he deserves. That happened to my friend in high school too, unfortunately it was some scrawny loser she saw. You'd think when something like that happened, you could at least walk in on a hot sexy guy in your school!!

i really like where this is going. UPDATE SOON!

Another great chapter! Keep up the good work and update soon! Maybe again this weekend?!?!?

Great chapter gain loved it

Great chapter i really like Gabriel and i just wanna know more about him that and i'm just waiting for the romance too start