He he. This was so cute!! I loved it...and the length was perfect too.

Great job! :P

All of your stories are so cute...

Ri

aww this was so cute
i loved it =)

It's sweet, :D All guys are dumb, apparently.. LOL.

AW~

the alternating perspectives worked wonderfully!
actually...your writing made the story come to life.

i loved it!

This one is definitely better than the unedited one, good job! They both made me smile, but this one gave me butterflies :)

i like this ending better
but its still really quick
keep writting