this is absolutely beautiful! the first line is so quiet and serene and i love the tone of it.

the next three lines are SO AMAZING, beautiful imagery and beautiful wording.

"and i am silent. and i am nervous," that is soo simple that its profound, and i know all of us can relate. i love it.

I LOVE THIS! also I went to your myspace page and you are absolutely amazzing at singing, you have the best voice! you're soo talented.

this is my favorite so far.
i could picture everything so clearly.

what's an hour, indeed.
this poem hit me on a personal level. i applaud you.

i don't know why this is so beautiful to me.
especially the stanza in the middle.
please continue this, i enjoy it very much.

i love the idea of chipping paint away to reveal whats underneath. a wonderful poem!