yay! i love this story! it makes me happy :D
update quickly please!

aaw, this is really cute! I love this!

'Now I like dogs, but this thing was not one of that noble species! I swear he was pure evil incarnated in pom-pom form!' This line made me laugh hard!

I like the tone you are using with Crystal and I also like the twist you have given to a classic fairytale. Very inventive. I can't wait to read on and find out how she is going to get back at her step family!

cute! looking forward to the next chapter!

That was great i can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe the prince will actually send her letters or something stupidly funny. Great job keep writing you got my interest.

This stories is getting really good..

I love this fable. Its strong has new twist doesn't a make the main characters look so fragile as people regularly do stero type women. I can't wait to read more. Good job. I can't wait to see what else you create.