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sarah loves charts. 2009-10-18 . chapter 1
This is one of those moments where I am glad I clicked on the "Just in" button.

This was a very strange, but wonderfully well-written piece. The idea of the city being on fire, a scene of destruction, and the two character wearing very nice clothes created an interesting image in my mind.

It was wrapped up perfectly, as well.

Very, very nice.
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