Hi!

This is good, but I felt it was a bit unrealistic. I know a bit about mental illness from people around me, and I think this probably should have been longer. It seemed a bit abrupt (Maybe even unprofessional) from the psychiatrist to just say 'take a holiday' all of a sudden.

Apart from that, I really enjoyed it.

Hope I've been on some help.
drama-queen.

Very short and to the point. There was enough detail in the play for the readers to undertand the problem of the character. I liked how you mentioned that your stories are inspired by events that happened in your own life, and i found that very interesting.

G'job Sam

P.S-- If you have time, I would love for you to review the SECOND CHAPTER of my story entitled Heart to Heart. I would love to hear from you :)

-Agent