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Reviews For: The Menacing Sea
Isca 2009-10-24 . chapter 1
This poem definitely flowed well. The sway/languorously rhyme was rather brilliant. :)
LostInMe 2009-10-20 . chapter 1
A lovely scene. I can feel a sense of calm in this poem, that the apple tree is beautiful and so is the sea, despite its rage. The sea cannot harm the speaker, who admires it from a distance. At least, that's what I got out of this poem.

Great job!
kloun mannequin 2009-10-20 . chapter 1
it makes me think about how wide is the world.
great piece.
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