Hi!

This is my frist review on this site, so hopefully I can be of some help.

I really liked it, it was very sweet. There were a couple of things I noticed:

'That... alone'
I didn't really underwtood this little bit. I seemed a bit unnessacery.

'Our friend left-'
I think it should be 'Our friend's left'

Apart from those two little things, it was perfect.

Hope I've been of some help,
drama-queen.