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Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-11-01 . chapter 2
It's good that Penny's making new friends in school. I hope she doesn't get bullied. And I kinda used to be bad in math too. I'm still struggling with geometry. But her mother didn't have to kill herself because of Penny's disabilities! Sure they're a bit stressful but they can be overcome! There are many successful people with disabilities and her mother shouldn't have underestimated her! But I hope Penny does well. Great work!
Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-10-21 . chapter 1
For a minute, I thought the beginning was going to be pretty dark and sexually-themed, but this chapter is rather quiet so far. I like it so far. So...is Penny blind? She has a dog around with her on a regular basis. Or maybe that's just me. I kinda tend to assume things when I see (or in this case, read) things that remind me of something else. But I like this so far! Keep up the good work!
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