Damn that's seven years bad luck on you. *nods head disappointedly* Oh well. The poem was well worth it!

"Rotted glass visage." Not only is this image vibrant and chilling, but the word 'peeling' adds such 'life' to this line.

"Shatters gracefully." I like how oxymoronic this is. 'Shattering' isn't usually a 'graceful' matter, but I really like that you link the two together - as if 'breaking down' is something 'beautiful.' :)

ahh, but it's so true.

i like this.