Aww this is a sweet poem =) I like the way you went into great details about what you would do. I'm not sure why the whole poem is hypothetical though, and the thought of all this sweetness being imaginary and not actually there is slightly disturbing.
~fleur

Just as I suspected -- today's strong, independent Liberated Women can be just as soft and mushy as their grandmothers when hey are in love. And all men should be grateful for that.

Very cliche idea but good anyway. Write on please!

~Anna~ ^_^

Aw, so cute!