I'll be honest, I'm getting a bit bored with the story, it may be because I expected the smart twin to be smarter, not get in the image of his twin instead..

Just read chapter 7 and am looking forawrd to your next update. This is a very good story. The sense of humour you have for Judah is good and fits his character well.

I feel so sorry for Judah when he tries to tell Shirley his feelings! Poor guy.

I liked this chapter. Now going on to read the rest.

how does ones best friend not know that there not their best friend?!?!?!
happy gobble gobble(turkey)day incase you dont update before then

finally he's know all about his brothers life and try to act it...

I don't think you should rewrite. I feel like the chapters are pretty solid, just keep going. Perhaps you don't even have to write the part where Jaden explains everything to Jay, just make him act different and have a random fact here and there, it would keep a mysterious vibe.

I really like your story so far.
I hope Jaden (Judah) and Nel get together.

Keep writing!

TK

I liked the last two chapters but okay!

cant waut for more

so is it shirley or nel?

this sounds promising i like it :))

another amazing chapter!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!! I cant wait until the next chapter to see who knows his secret!!Update soon :)

hey,

i was reading another one of your stories and found this listed...

i like it...hope to read more of it soon.

good luck,

I like the story idea, however cliche it may be, but there were a lot of mistakes here and there that make the story a bit unlikable and difficult to read. You might want to reread it a few times or get yourself a Beta to do that.

Anyway, I can tell you like writing it, so I wish you the best of luck :)

Forever and Always,
DolphinWriter88

haha poor boy