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MostFrantic 2009-12-10 . chapter 7
Good, very good.
house of flies 2009-12-06 . chapter 7
amazing ending.
disgusteddiscussion 2009-12-04 . chapter 7
I'm sad that it's so short, but I know what you mean about dragging stories past their endings.

I love it! I actually was feeling close to tears at the end. You should be very proud of yourself - Stockholm Syndrome is really hard to spin into true romance (I've tried) and you did so very well. Kudos :)
Night's-Freedom 2009-12-04 . chapter 7
WHOOP WHOOP!! lol
HEY!
Aw this chappie is awesome :D They finally got back together YAY!
Well, I hope u have a good week and that there's more to the story and that we'll get it soon. It's my birthday yanno, so u have to do as I say lol, nd i say update soon ;D
Pwitty pweez :P
BYE!!
x x x
snuffdiva 2009-12-04 . chapter 7
At first I was a little disappointed because I wanted more, but a couple of seconds later I came to my senses and realised that that was the PERFECT ending to this story! This is *definitely* one of my favorites. xD

Stunning stuff, my friend!
Fangbanger 2009-12-04 . chapter 7
Wootness! Awesome update! I was so excited when I saw the email from FP about your story. Definitely not disappointed with this at all.

I myself have a character that fell in love with his captor, but I never thought to write such a scenario from the kidnapper's point of view. It was a brilliant idea and you wrote it remarkably well. It's definitely got a dark twist to it, but is very romantic, so you accomplished your goal.

One thing, though, Damon's friend, did Gabriel ever meet him?
MostFrantic 2009-11-24 . chapter 5
Wicked. I like it.
writingright 2009-11-23 . chapter 6
so how's it been... yeah me? well you see *tries to think of a reason why I haven't been reviewing* ... I have no reasons... Not really sufficient ones. I just haven't realized the updates so you know what. ** there I just added it to alerts so now I won't seem like I abandoned it. Because I haven't I swear! :D keep updating please and thank you, I'll try to be a better reviewer...
Night's-Freedom 2009-11-23 . chapter 6
HI!
Found this on disgutseddiscussions favourites nd I totally love it so I just thought I'd spread tht love around :P
I hope Gabriel's gonna be ok nd tht Damon comes back soon, cause as weird as they are they're cute too lol.
Have a gd week!
Hope u can update soon!
BYE!!
x x x
house of flies 2009-11-22 . chapter 6
i thought there was something funny about the big gap, but you had said there would be longer periods between each chapters so i assumed it was just the natural progression. applause around the house for the missing chapter.
Fangbanger 2009-11-22 . chapter 5
Please tell me that there's more to this than what you have here. D=

I think it's interesting that you chose to explore Damon's point of view instead of Gabriel's. Can't say I fully understand what's going on in his head, but that doesn't mean he isn't cool. xD

I have to ask though, is this a twist on Stockholm Syndrome? If it is, it's done brilliantly. Much better than what I could ever write. Makes me jealous. xD

Hope there's more!

Fang
disgusteddiscussion 2009-11-18 . chapter 6
Wow. I really like the concept of this story, and it's emotional intensity. I love love love Gabriel :)
Keela1221 2009-11-18 . chapter 5
Wow, that's kinda...offending, er something Damion makes himself his world then just drops him, the ring and card though were awsome, so Damion's forgivin. This is great!
Keela1221 2009-11-18 . chapter 4
ok, so I'm pretty sure this is a story where Gabriel identifies with his kidnapper, the Stockholems syndrom or whatever it's called, right? It's kinda dark, but not bad, I like it.
snuffdiva 2009-11-18 . chapter 3
Nice! I'm glad you posted this chapter as it's one of my favorites! Gabriel is so painfully cute and Damon's getting sexy in warped kind of way; that bath scene at the end was... guh! Snuffy likes. ;)

I liked that scene betwee Damon and Simon too, it was so eerie to see Damon socialising in a normal environment and with a normal person. I especially liked the amiguous line that Simon said at the end of that scene; it makes me wonder if his previous relatonships were ordinary or whether they involved other young men being brainwashed in the basement. Very creepy but also very cool.

Stellar work.
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