| Reviews for Were Wide Awake |
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Black Sparrow 10/22/09 . chapter 1That's so beautiful. |
Butterfly Catches Net 10/22/09 . chapter 1Very nice, the flowing feel of it gives it a dreamy sort of loveliness. c: There was one typo I caught, in the line "To potent to describe," it should be "too" and not "to." Otherwise, very well done, and nice imagery! I imagined a young girl lying on her bed after some sort of shocking incident, thinking of her lover and being calmed down. I hope this was the intent! :} |
Mirabella 10/22/09 . chapter 1Aw, so lovely! :) A beautiful little poem. |