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Little girl Big world 2009-11-22 . chapter 25
This happened to me awhile ago. I hate drifting friends
Little girl Big world 2009-11-22 . chapter 23
I love the last line. So full of emotion
Little girl Big world 2009-11-22 . chapter 22
I love when the rain comes in my window.
Little girl Big world 2009-11-22 . chapter 21
I love the last two lines.
Heartbreaking
Little girl Big world 2009-11-22 . chapter 20
Reasons two and three, I understand.
I love writing with a pen or pencil and paper, it feels more old fashioned now that I started typing just about everything.
Little girl Big world 2009-11-22 . chapter 19
This is easy to relate to for me.
Little girl Big world 2009-11-22 . chapter 18
Short and simple but full of emotion and power
Little girl Big world 2009-11-22 . chapter 17
I've had this thought too.
Little girl Big world 2009-11-22 . chapter 16
Saying goodbye is hard but not getting a chance to say goodbye is harder. I'm sorry
Isca 2009-11-20 . chapter 21
"It feels like you've never even existed, you've been gone for so long." This line really hit home for me - it reminded me of people I used to know: people who moved away, people who died, etc. Keep writing. :)
Little girl Big world 2009-11-17 . chapter 15
I'm in the same place. Except I got my license so now I need a job..SCARY! Everything is moving fast. Time is so weird. I understand how you're feeling.
Little girl Big world 2009-11-17 . chapter 14
I love the title of this chapter.
Little girl Big world 2009-11-17 . chapter 13
I'm sorry. I know how that feels.
Little girl Big world 2009-11-17 . chapter 12
I think it would be so cool to send notes back to the past.
I think about that a lot.
Little girl Big world 2009-11-17 . chapter 11
It's weird how sometimes you just go back to people as a comfort...I dunno if that situation fits here but that's what I got out of it.
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