Ha, I never really noticed, but that's kinda true. Very clever. I liked the playful mocking, the voice just makes this whole poem so...cute might be the word i'm looking for, not sure, but it's very nice. Great job, Peace
SO true! I'm a bit of a feminist, and I like this poem because it reminds us that though we try so hard, a lot of people just throw away what we've worked for to get back to where we started... it's sad... a nice piece of work to get you thinking.