you see: you
are having the
experiences i
told you that
you would.

ah, this is more like you. i like the first stanza in particular, especially the idea of breaking skin. lovely. :) still, very mellow, very content to just be a poem. i enjoy.

this is different from your normal style. it feels very organic and natural. not that your other work isn't that, but i'm probably referring more to the subject matter of this. it's soft and pretty and still has some element that keeps it from being too girly or whatnot. but yes, it's nice. i like it. :)

it sounds like a lovely place to write poetry, this is true. i like sitting by the river and writing when it's nice out. so pretty, and serene. i'm a fan of the "thin female" in this. nice.