I'm back! Hehe, i haven't been reading your stories for a very long time. And now one of my favourite stories is up! I loved ur two-shot and now it's going to be a story with many chapters. Can't wait. I'm so bored so pls update as soon as you can and i'll be so happy. The first 2 chapters were nicely written by the way!

nice!
update soon..
Jaliy!~

Cool story! :)
I like how it's going so far. Definitely can't wait for another chapter soon. Awesome!

Nice! a good "Hook"...
Your writing is really wonderful..you can usually predict whether a story is good or bad by reading the first chapter and your story will belong to the former..I hope..
update soon!
Jaliy!~

oh wow! Can't wait for more

Whoa...I didn't know that you were going to make a chapter version of the two-shot, which was incredible by the way. I'm so looking forward to it...You're awesome!!

-OHMYGOSH!

I'm so excited for the chapter version of this story! The two-shot was so good!

Can't wait till the next update! :)