| Reviews for Blue State |
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in theory 11/14/09 . chapter 1I love how you connect the images of the haiku to each other, in such a short space you reiterate the theme without seeming repetetive. For what it's worth I'm pro-walking (cars are bad), pro-choice (choose life) and pro-rain (it means I don't have to make an effort styling my hair). As always an intriguing little haiku. Have you ever though of bundling all of your haikus together? Jack |
drink me pretty 11/8/09 . chapter 1Loved this. I like the double entendre of "pro-life" and how it applies to the issue of abortion, but also to those already living as well. |
Moondog Dozier 10/28/09 . chapter 1Interesting political spin on this. The end line wraps it up conceptually and visually. MD:77. |
Brenda Agaro 10/24/09 . chapter 1Very interesting and thought provoking. I like the blue and pro-life concept. |
Isca 10/23/09 . chapter 1Does "blue" on a pregnancy test mean "pregnant" or "not pregnant"? Either way, I liked the connection between 'blue' and 'pro-life.' :) |