|Reviews for Blue State|
| in theory 11/14/09 . chapter 1
I love how you connect the images of the haiku to each other, in such a short space you reiterate the theme without seeming repetetive. For what it's worth I'm pro-walking (cars are bad), pro-choice (choose life) and pro-rain (it means I don't have to make an effort styling my hair). As always an intriguing little haiku. Have you ever though of bundling all of your haikus together?
| drink me pretty 11/8/09 . chapter 1
I like the double entendre of "pro-life" and
how it applies to the issue of abortion, but
also to those already living as well.
| Moondog Dozier 10/28/09 . chapter 1
Interesting political spin on this. The end line wraps it up conceptually and visually. MD:77.
| Brenda Agaro 10/24/09 . chapter 1
Very interesting and thought provoking. I like the blue and pro-life concept.
| Isca 10/23/09 . chapter 1
Does "blue" on a pregnancy test mean "pregnant" or "not pregnant"?
Either way, I liked the connection between 'blue' and 'pro-life.' :)