I liked it, it's very vivid in description and the way you put things makes it all the more real. I especially like " And you kneel to them, in surrender", and that whole second paragraph.
Overall, this is a very descriptive piece with a lot of honesty and truth put into it. I like it.

I like this, Its true we some times just have to pick the lesser of two evils :-) or make the best of what we are dealt either way and hey thanks for the review

this is incredible! great work :) extremely accurate and truthful.
ps my name is stephanie too.