Oh how sweet

soooooo cute... i love it waahhhh...
i'm smiling like an idiot right now :D

so cute! great set up and building of plot and emotions. I also really liked some random details like when that guy says something along the lines of "well, if thinking is that difficult maybe you shouldn't." I burst out laughing! I also really like the sequence of his imagined scenarios followed by the "but that wasn't it." Great technique.

One thing I had to mention though, when you say "fallowed" you mean to say "followed." The mistake occurred too many times for it to be a simple typo.

Great characters, great story, and great writing. Loved it!

Can U write a U ever watch 07-Ghost,if u do can U make an OC like Mikage in began like this, Ren & Oki relationship began 2 grow better(especially in sex) however Ren's friend from his old school is the new transfer student & Oki doesn't like him because he too close to Ren & he know Ren more than he do.

Awwe :D This has to be one of my favourites from your stories...

. Super Kawaii!

I love this story!

Oki and Ren are adorable

I want them *grabby hands*

sorry no constructive criticism here, and I

Overall I really liked this story. Very cute idea, nice job on the execution. This last chapter threw me for a loop a little bit though. The full on sex came really fast, and it's completely unrealistic to go without lube, at least on the first time. So I had a hard time believing that Oki would do that or Ren would let it happen. But other than that, I really liked.

I LOVE THIS STORY!

I really loved this a few spelling errors here and there but it was great

Wow, this was awesome, and so cute!

-Lain :]

Amazing, loved it, wish there would be more though, xD

Aww! *-* This is so absolutely adorably cute! I'm running out of words :D

Silly Ren-kun, bullying is a sign of affection at that age! Phew! I thought Akira was going to get mad...That yaoi made me shiver. Cute ending to this chapter!

I smell a romantic set-up.