"Outside must be azure." I like that the title could lead right into this line - that's so cool.

"Rapturously." Lovely word choice.

"You must think you know yourself completely." I like that the word 'think' suggests that the speaker will never truly know herself at all.

"The skin on your arms will slide off with the water." Vivid, chilling imagery.

Your imagery is clever, as always. Really captivating.

Interesting... I have to say it's hard for me to keep up with your newer work, you seem to be all over the place.