Senility and Ema are awesome names. :D Especially Ema, it's extremely cute.

I would watch your grammar and spelling, and perhaps explain your world a bit more - that's my only advice. :)

This has great potential. Really great potential.

However, I would edit all of the grammar and spelling mistakes - perhaps a beta reader to help you? I'd be more then willing to offer my services.

You did a really good job. Watch your spelling and grammer. Your story is very interesting. I can't beleive that a person of your age wrote this. Nicely done. Can't wait to read more.

I have Ideas for your next chapter if you want you want more ideas. I'll call you tonight. MOM

Nice start!
:D
Update soon?

My first FP review in ages. Hope it helps!
Anyway, the description in this story stood out for me with a lot of detail that I could picture easily. The opening paragraph was interesting too, and a nice little bit on different worlds. Ema sounds like a good character so far, with her personality coming across in the dialogue. And the fammals are certainly unique!
One thing to watch is grammar; just things like commas, and quotation marks in some places. Also, and I really hope you don't take this the wrong way, but slowing down the action a little would help. It feels like Ema's really rushing along, and a slower pace might help us with appreciating the story a bit. However, it does give it quite a pace (chapter 2 especially) so it's not bad or anything!
A good start :)

Very interesting! I also noticed you improved your grammar! I am a bit confused on some parts so a little more explanation would be nice please. You are also a bit jumpy on dialogue but overall a good story so far! On a scale of 1-10: 8. :)

I would highly reccomend some grammer and spelling checks, along with just some all over editing (not for language, but for paragraphs, quotation marks, ect.). All in all, sounds like it will be an interesting story.

I honestly loved it and enjoyed it! It had a broad vocabulary and you described things so beautifully that I could picture it in my mind. I also loved how you used so much feeling in the characters. I will be checking for the second chapter no doubt! Thank you also for the lovely comment on my story. I'm glad I could help you with your writer's block. :)