Intense, and powerful. You presented an interesting and important message, and I really like the overall theme. The perspective from which this is told is interesting too; how it is brought into everyday light. I like the meter of thispoem, all the words fit in just so. Great writing.
It is always important to stick to loving humanity, even when it hates itself. If this is true, then I totally understand why you'd keep it. Very interesting tribute, not doubt, Peace
Punslinger 2009-10-24 . chapter 1
A beautiful melancholy tribute to the good and bad qualities in all of us.