awesome.

.thinking

Only suggestions I can give are these...

Now he had to doge (DODGE) blows,

His (HE) searched in the shadows,

Other than that is a nice piece. I really like how he keeps on going even when he knows his body is ready to give up.

Oh and somedays I just can't read... I swear I had to reread the first sentance because I thought it said Danielle lol.

Happy? I read it.:P

It's really good, too!

Great job. I'm joining FictionPress now...

Wow. That was a cool story. I totally go it because your described everything so good.

I don't have anything "bad" to say :)

Just loved it!.

YohKo B.