|Reviews for Find My Way Back to Wonderland|
| vitriolicvermilion 2/21/10 . chapter 1
I so relate to this. Not only do I love Alice in Wonderland (and I, too, cannot wait for the movie) I often want to get out of reality. Don't we all?
| simpleplan13 2/19/10 . chapter 1
"Freezing the time"... the word the there seemed odd
I like the phrasing here. It's very storybook like, which works well since it's about Wonderland. I also like the Wonderland references because I agree with you a/n. Nice use of parenthesis and other punctuation as well.
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| LittlePieceLove 11/4/09 . chapter 1
Haha, this was cruel;
And so true.!
It seems like we can never escape reality,
And don't we all wish we were able to, like Alice?
I love it. :))
| Rei Aisaka 10/25/09 . chapter 1
I love Alice in Wonderland too! LEWIS CARROLL IS AWESOME.
Anyway... Your poem reflects the way I feel about life now, in a way. Life's harsh and good things usually aren't made to last. Most of the time, when we want to relive those beautiful memories, it's already impossible.
I especially like the fourth stanza and the poem flows rather well too. Good job!