Trying not to forget to review...but I didn't forget and so I leave another review...cause it's a great story...and an awesome chap to boot.

o, cliff hanger. can't wait to read what happens next. ^^

Awesome chap...heheh

That was totally fantastic, couldn't stop reading...so I had to catch up in the chapters...Totally awesome...XD

great story. Can't wait for more.

wow people need to start reviewing your story...cause it's great...and I don't want ya to stop writing it...XC

Awesome chapter...really can't wait to see what happens next...but don't try to rush it...XD

Awesome chapter...such a bitchy father, but can't really judge an individual..XD..looking forward to the next chapter.

It's really a good story I think, a bit confusing the in the middle when he loses her

it was a good start