Oh man, that was fantastic. I can FEEL their chemistry radiating from my laptop screen. Dammit, I wish it was longer!

I love it how you've managed to characterise the protagonist so well in only a short story. That is what I call talent. She's such a sweet girl, not like the annoying self-righteous hags in many fp stories. Very refreshing and enjoyable.

"The girl formerly known as leggy red head, now known as Cassandra..."
I love your writing and Chantée's humor. That line actually made me laugh out loud. It's so casual and such a Chantée thing to say.

Needless to say, I'm going to go and enjoy your other stories, so now I will take my leave.


Liz xx

Cool!This was really good. You're an awesome writer,and since I didn't get to see Sapphires and Emeralds on FictionPress I hope I can see it on shelves!

Love this one shot. Y didn't you make it into a long story.

I really enjoyed reading this. This is my first story of yours that I've read but the writing style in this story is very descriptive and, what's the word I'm looking for? Formal? My point being that it was impressed with your word choice and your adjectives were amazing. I'll definitely be off to read some more of your stories. Keep up the great work!

-Lucy

Argh. I leave fictionpress for a bit and this is what happens. You churn out all this amazing stuff that I haven't read yet. I feel utterly wretched now.

This story was very cute, not cheezy, loved your characters. I can't remember if I ever told you before in a review (guess it's been that long), but there's just something about your stories that makes me laugh out loud, feel all achey in the heart right along with your characters, and very nearly whooping for joy at the happy ending.

Uh I liked it.
Except the ending was a bit rushed. You could have like perfected the ending a bit more? Otherwise I would have favourited it =]

I just absolutely love it! I like the way you wrote this particular oneshot...very formal :D

I think that you started it off very well but tbh, I thinnk the ending was a bit too rushed. Personal opinion but yeah :)

Loving the whole story but maybe let Micah not discover what she's doing and then confronting her later on at home maybe?

nice one shot! it was a little too quick for my liking but superb nonetheless. it would've been better if micah's pov was shown or it was explained why he liked Chantee

that was funny. who would have thought you would have so much lust in you? very good job.

Cute story. You always have such different scenarios in your stories, and I enjoy that.

One thing I'm left wondering is why Micah didn't like her originally. I guess I can be left to wonder, though. ;)

Aw, that was just so cool. The plot development and characters were just brilliant with the right amount of build up.
JM

I have to say, you're a great writer. Wonderful, engaging piece with little to none grammar or spelling mistakes (at least to my knowledge). If I sounded like a teacher there, please excuse me, becuase I had to look up Au Pair in wikipedia and now the formal format is sort of stuck in my head.

this is good

You guys call it 'yoghurt' down south? (There's no 'h' in the American version.)

I'm confused about the au pair bit because of the being-like-a-sister thing. Actually wait, I'm not. (I'm writing this out as I'm thinking it...and I just went on Google and looked up 'au pair'. I always thought of it a maid or nanny or something but I never considered them a part of the family. Bleh.)

I like the Micah's name. It sounds so...Jewish. (Okay...just checked on Google and it IS Jewish.)

Maybe I should stop writing thought-dump reviews since you probably don't care what my crappy thought-process is.

Anyway...I thought it could have been drawn out some at the end when they get together. It was a tad fast just at that part.

Otherwise, it was great!
- Rebekah