WOW. wow. The whole time reading it I kept hearing this Irish/Scottish brouge in my head. I don't know why but this is good and I like the idea of making our songs into stories. Keep going.

Ohmygosh, this was cool! :D I live in Duluth myself and was thrilled to see this as it has always been a favorite song of mine! :D Keep up the good work! *huggles*

This is a very good piece. Actually, there is a nonfiction option on FP, the essay section, though it doesn't sound like it. I like the details in this and the reference to the Gordon Lightfoot song. Good job.

Best of Luck,

Sergeant Rock