This is beautiful.
"Dried wheat hung from wooden beams." What a stunning image.
"The scars of unsaid whispers." Brilliant! :)

This is lovely, you set the scene for the reader, but you also add that alluring aspect of forbiddon love, and silent lust. Great job with this, I can't say enough about it, I think I have to add it to my favorites. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.