I like the contrast between the words 'heraldic' and 'quiet.' I love the fact that the speaker desires 'a quiet love.' I just find that very 'noble' for some reason. :)

Your use of 'heraldic' makes me think of swords banging, or slashing against sheilds - a great and powerful noise, and I like how you compare that with the idea of a 'quiet love' it blends nicely in my mind. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.