I love this!

Excellent. The personality jumps out of this one quite well. Great haiku. MD:77.

i liked it, i can practically see the beach. though i don't get the relation between jacob and this, la pus beach.

i don't know why people are still obsessed with twi, i mean, i got over it and i think there are many books that are better. yeah, shoot me twi-lovers, i used to be one of you guys but i've seen the light. lol

This is very good.

I like the line about the waves. Very well done.

And spot on with the Twilight joke! XD

"waves and I taunt each other" is completely brilliant. I have no idea how you come up with such spectacular phrases, but I applaud you.

Oh, that final "waves/and I taunt each other" speaks very powerfully to me, just the image of you mocking each other, daring and pushing each other. It's very powerful (I always forget Scorpio is a water sign, it seems to me it should have been fire but there ya go).

Jack

'The waves and I taunt each other' is one of the most amazing things I've read in... ages. This haiku makes me think of a friend of mine who, like you, lives in America. She loves the ocean and is constantly jealous that, as an Australian, I have access to beaches and oceans at almost every turn.

I also like the summary, though I loath Twilight.

Peace, Daze