This is just awesome! Beautifully simple! Very powerful.

"Dark bathrooms, mirrors newly washed." This is my favourite part - it's very vivid.

Visual. Relatable, and simple enough to stretch to greater meanings. Good haiku. MD:77.

I like how you incorporate different senses, using visual, taste, and feeling.

Hmm. Interesting piece. I like it. :)

It amazes me that you can think up such brilliant pieces. I like the contrast with the coffee and the mirror in this one.

I like the paradox you present here; the dull, old, used feeling of the coffee-coated tongue, and the newly shined mirrors. The overall effect is one of...renewal? It's a hopeful feeling.

Jack

I like how you can describe a bathroom in a take-away joint and on the other side of the globe I can picture it perfectly. This was great, I really got a strong image from it. And a yearning for coffee all of a sudden. Hmm.

Peace, Daze