|Reviews for Kiss of Twilight: Betrayed by the Dawn|
| Guest 5/9/13 . chapter 1
I want to cry
| Joey The Apple 5/3/13 . chapter 1
I have forgotten, what the only hope I had of you ever updating, felt like...
| Katrina 4/27/13 . chapter 4
I know its been a while, but I really am hooked on this story! Please finish this story, it would be very wonderful if you did
| Hera 4/21/13 . chapter 1
Uhmmm.. Is there any tini-tiny chance that you'll update? Even in 2013? I BEG YOOOUUUUU!
| Guest 4/20/13 . chapter 4
WHY, OH, WHYYY!? WHY MOST YOU TORMENT ME LIKE THIS?! WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED IN TWO YEARS!? OHHHH,,, NOOOOOOO! why?
| Anon 4/16/13 . chapter 4
Hi! Just wanted to let you know there's someone still reading your stories!
In fact, I've been reading it over and over again hoping someday a new chapter will appear... that's how much I like you stories. Thanks for writing them )
| Caitiespace 3/31/13 . chapter 4
So I'm new to Fiction Press and decided that I wanted to find out what other people were writing on here, and I ended up finding Or So The Story Goes.
Two days of doing practically nothing else later, and I've caught up to where Kiss of Twilight: Betrayed by the Dawn is up to. And I've been left wanting!
It's been a long time since I've been sucked into any piece of fiction, and I just wanted to let you know what an awesome series of books this is. I've enjoyed writing for a very long time, but I've never been able to write high fantasy as well as you do. I probably never will. If you haven't been picked up by an agent or publishing house yet, then they're idiots.
I know it's been awhile since you've posted any updates to this story, and I know how life/work/relationships can get in the way of writing, but I just wanted to let you know that I'll wait for you!
Thanks for the great series so far. I may just go and reread them and become even more obsessed about them than I am now!
| Reader 3/19/13 . chapter 4
OMG okay, so let me tell you a story... there was once a girl who waited 7 months for the third book of her favorite series. She is obsessed and criies jusst at the thoughht of a character dying. No, thisis not the seriees,but this is the girl. So, the book JUST came out TODAY and ran into the house to read it, however... instead I put thee book in a gallon ziplock bag and put it on my desk. WHY? Because I was captured by this story. I was on book two wwhen I got home and read everything, up to this point. NEVER EVER have I read a sstory that has gained sso mucch of my attention. Sso here I am, writing you this on my nook, and I hate typing on my nook. All this is just to prove to you how engrossed I am in your story. I could count on one hand how many times I have commented on story out of hundreds that I've read. I aapologize for all the missspells but this series is in my top 3 and you have become my second favorite writer. And I do have hugh standards and sincerely am sorry abot the typos. Please update! Forever yours, your reader.
| kingdomfantasyanime453 3/6/13 . chapter 3
Dear Miss Michelle,
I know your story from ficpress, have known it for years now.
I was wondering when you will update, or are you waiting to publish?
Please reply and thank you for your time
| tamarbastet 2/26/13 . chapter 1
The previous review was from me, my computer decided to log me out for whatever reason... But I stand by it: PLEASE UPDATE!
| Guest 2/26/13 . chapter 4
I am a fairly new reader of your beautiful stories. I have read most of them in a couple of days. Your stories are exciting, beautiful and exactly a read I was looking for to spent my days. What I am going to ask you now will probably not come as a suprise: PLEASE UPDATE! You are an incredible good writer, lots of talent and you write compelling stories. Please don't leave me stranded here on this climax! If I had so many fans as you have, I wouldn't let my readers wait 2 years!
P.S. If you still have trouble finding publishers for you books, why not publish them yourself, there are various websites where you can do it even for free, like . I will buy your books! I am your fan!
so enough said, you know what you should do: write! And make me happy!
Lots of love from Amsterdam:)
| Guest 2/22/13 . chapter 4
i saw your stories a few days ago, and have been trying to read them non-stop!
they are AMAZING!
all those publishers who turned u down must be crazy
but please please please update!
its been two yrs :'(
| Universal808 1/13/13 . chapter 4
Wow. This is a very intresting outcome.
I've discovered your story OSTSG, been hooked up to it, found out there was a trilogy as a sequel... well, you get my point. I really love the character development in your past works, and now I'm very intrested in the bargains that Melina makes. It's very intresting that Melina would be able to bring Eve back to life... I remember, when I found ut Eve was going to die, I was screaming and lashing, refusingit to be true. And now this... Just wow.
I really do want to know what the price is (Obviously high) but it may be highly dangerous. Truth be told, I LOVE Eve. Favorite character in the book! She always helps Helena in decisions and is such a good friend. It's hard to think that she used to be nothing more than an object until that one fateful day when Helena stepped into her life. I really hate that people treat servants or maids like garbage. I have a maid back at home, and we treat her like family. In fact, I thought she was an aunt at first. Which is one of the reasons why I LIKE EVE.
But if she dies, and Melina does not bring her back I will KILL YOU. No, I won't. Cuz you won't be able to finish the story. And please update soon! It's already the year of 2013, and this has been last updated 2011! I CAN'T GO ON ANY LONGER. Actually, I can. But pleeaassee update soon!
| Lauren Stargazer 1/8/13 . chapter 4
I found your stories recently and fell in love with them. I know that it has been over a year since your last update on this story, but I still hope that you'll update soon. Keep up the fantastic work and please update.
| Nicole 11/25/12 . chapter 4
PLEASE update! My happiness depends on it