|Reviews for Kiss of Twilight: Betrayed by the Dawn|
| Crystal Royale 3/27/11 . chapter 3
My goodness, it's been so long I didn't recognize the name FictionPress at first! I'm pleased to see a new chapter for such a fabulous story. Life does indeed suck at times, but I'm glad to see things starting to look up for you, and it's good to see you back writing again.
I really like that we're finally getting some backstory on Melina; it's definitely needed, and it does slightly lessen my dislike of her. I still want to smack Vinny upside the head and tell him to stop being suck an idiot! XD
I'm really interested to see where things go from here, and I'm excited to see what things are like in Zephyr compared to the other kingdoms so far explored.
Good luck to you and happy writing!
| Eisette 3/26/11 . chapter 3
Ah, this chapter was great! I'm so glad your life has picked up again too :) And thank you for mentioning me at the end! It made me grin :3
Ah, I wish I could see Vinny's reaction when he realises Helena, Melina and Eve are gone! Call me cruel, but I imagine he'd be so heartbreakingly upset
| manda rose 3/26/11 . chapter 3
Such a good chapter! It was nice to learn the whole (if brief) tale of Melina's past. Well, maybe not the whole tale, but at least the beginning haha. For some reason, I like Melina. She's scary and selfish, but she makes me wonder.
Anyway, update soon! I can't wait to read more about Helena, and her story has almost reached its end! Unless, of course, this book winds up becoming longer than planned and there's a fourth...
| Xanthe P 3/25/11 . chapter 3
Oh! I'm so sorry about all the bad stuff that happened to you. :(
But I'm glad you have a new boyfriend now! I wish you all the best. :)
YAY for an update! I've missed this story a lot. I hope for more soon! Keep on being an amazing author, okay? :D
| MellyMeliza 3/25/11 . chapter 3
When I saw the update in my email I thought it was going to say you were going to stop writing Kiss of Twilight.
A good one too.
Good chapter, glad you're back, and sorry for the bad things that happened.
| SourTofu 3/25/11 . chapter 3
Am I dreaming? *rubs eyes* but the alert for a KOT update is still here! *clicks link* And, and, there's Helena and Eve and Melina and Vinny...*faints from shock*
But no really, it's great to have you back! this series is still one of my top five and i can't wait for the final installment. even if it does take five more years to finish...:p
also, sorry that you've had such a sucky year. but it sounds like thing are coming around for you (at least with the super sweet new boyfriend;) so that's good too!
and don't worry about the long update i understand (i think my FF readers are ready to kill me. i haven't updated since last summer...i should get on that...)
| AngelGarnet 3/25/11 . chapter 3
I'm so glad you've updated again! I've been checking around every so often to see if you've put anything up (even though I get chapters sent to my e-mail haha)
I'm glad that you have a lovely boyfriend now : D
Even if everything seems down, you have to remember that then, things can only go up, and eventually, everything rights itself again.
I hope you write some more soon!
how is trying to get published going?
| Ivymax1234 3/24/11 . chapter 3
Thank you so much for updating! I've been looking forward to an update. And now that it's up... I find that I've forgotten most of this story. So, now I must ask myself, should I reread? Nah, I won't. Maybe someday... when bunnies fly and I finally update myself! D
Anyway, I loved the chapter, and I was wondering if the whole thing with the "one drawingone update" was still going. If not, that's great too... (my drawing of Helena was by no means good... *shudder*)
I hope you do finish by the time you start school again, and if not... Well, never mind.
Thanks again for updating!
| redambrosia 3/23/11 . chapter 3
Yay! You're Back! Finaly Helena realized who the big bad witch is! I seriously wanted to jump into the story and scream it at her! Anyways, great start so please update sooner!
| LondonLi 3/23/11 . chapter 3
Wow, life's been a rollercoaster for you lately, hasn't it? I'm glad it's on an upswing! Thanks so much for the update; you sure left us in one heck of a cliffie last time!
| ellectf 3/23/11 . chapter 3
I am so far beyond happy that you've updated this! I adore this story, it's my absolute favorite :)
I'm sorry to hear about all of the stuff that you've had to go through, I'm glad you've found someone who will treat you right though :)
I look forward to starting to see your work again!
| createavacuum 3/22/11 . chapter 3
GAH! I nearly had an orgasm when I saw that you had updated… anyway, great chapter! I'm so excited about this!
| ebs12 3/22/11 . chapter 3
it's hard to escape real life sometimes. I hope all gets better. Update soon
| Erika-Faye 3/22/11 . chapter 3
i can't tell you how excited i was when i checked my emails and saw an email saying there was a new chapter of Kiss of Twilight! :D :D :D :D
this really cheered me up to.. i've been having a bad couple of weeks so thanked you for updating! :D
i really liked hearing from Lycan. he's an interesting character. i kinda suspected that Melina was more powerful than she made out to be; she was just much too cocky for her own good. but the cliff hanger was mean! D:
i wish vinny had made an appearance! hehe
| elphaba731 3/22/11 . chapter 3
Another phenomenal chapter! Welcome back (: