ur welcome for the ideas Carmen:]
lol i luv this chapter 13...i wonder wats goin to happen next

Yeppers I wrote it...yeah its getting lame isn' it? -crowd says "BOO YOU STINK"- anyways...i'll try to make it funnier so...wait...as i get an ...idea...OH ONE JUST POPPED UP RIGHT NOW :D

Hmm...Not much of a story for me to write o-o cuhs i got no brain that time needed to think fast before deadline :O

Lol theres a bit more grandpa:P The kenny evil luagh was funny:P And we got an emo girl which i asked for in another review:P

LOL "guy thing" XD

Gary would probably use tht as a ringtone XD

Poo :o

Lol the pikachu thing was good:P

Me wrote this~ But I'm new so I gave it to MidNiite to post it :] ILY :D TEHPOCKII AND MIDNIITE

Grandpapa is so easily forgotten xD
I'll try to include more Grandpapa.
And ask Carmen and Jasmine to include more in their chapters too.

hah nice story:P

Yay we met grandpa:P Whats a pocky btw? Anyway i wonder will there be any mention of aiden with the emo girl equation?

That family sounds awesome:P I want more grandpa!:O

hahahahahah this was funny:P Surely you cant take a kid off the road for no reason?:P The last bit with the postit was so funny:P

OMG THIS IS SO FUDGING FUNNY HAHAHAHAH

LOL THAT WAS SO CUTE XD

Your humor is rather redundant. Things like " 'pocky = life'. He is addicted to POCKY" just kind of ruins your reputation more than anything. The emoticons were a little annoying too. Any why was there a lollipop in the fridge? More than that, why are all your quotations in the middle of paragraphs?