Oh, dear, Felicia. Another awesome little poemette. Your imagery never fails to astound me. Definitely loving the alliteration in this one; probably my favorite part. :D But then the last two sentences are just the perfect conclusion. Agh. You make me sick.

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I really liked this one, even though I've never read Brave New World (I've started it a million times, but always get distracted). I like how it started off with the jerking movement; kinda sets the tone for the whole piece. The fourth line looks a little out of place to me, but the line itself is awesome. :D I LOVE the paradox of the last sentence, how she moves faintly into the brave new world... Oh. Just awesome. :D

Oh, I loved Grendel. Definitely one of the better books we read. Very short and effective piece. Certainly conveys the mood of the book, and also captures some of my thoughts whilst we read it. So yeah. Nice to see you on fp. ^^