For a short story, this was heart-wrenching. I love the confusion of self in the beginning, and then ending was just 'aoiajkasdg;lkadsvjnkrajuarg'.

That good.
Beautiful piece, really.

~Ark

Um… wow. I found this by accident while I was browsing around, and I must say I’m glad I did.

This is a very well written piece, though the two-in-one combination of Jay and Coyote is somewhat confusing at first, though I assume this is most likely intentional. The story is intriguing; revealing only enough information so that the reader isn’t totally lost, then focusing solely on the present characters. Have you considered expanding this? I must say this could easily be turned into a full length work.

Mostly, I’m just impressed with how well you write. I couldn’t find any grammatical errors, and your words flow together quite smoothly.

I’ll definitely check out some of your other work.

Canaletto