Ooh, nice, very nice indeed. I can totally relate.

eh...not one of ur best, but still okay.

That was absolutely beautiful. Lovely coherence, yet still strikingly poetic! Nice job. I especially enjoyed how you captured that feeling to which many of us can relate. Very original and wonderfully done.

Another Good One. It does seem alot of people don't look for the entire truth dose it?

Yeah, you left me with nothing to say.

Very nice! Exactly what happens a lot with people when they hear something thing, a rumor. Or when they come into one of those times when it looks like something it's not. And can happen when it deals with you yourself...some secret in which you'd rather not tell that person but share with another it could hurt them that you don't trust them enough or other things like that. And then they prefer to be stubborn and not try to listen to the other end of the story! It was a very nice poem! I liked it a lot. _ Well done!