 Ara Crae 2009-10-30 . chapter 1What is absolutely amazing to me is the way that you as a writer go from emotional, to romantic, to humorous and it never gets old. You always have some spark of originality to add to each of your stories. This was another enjoyable read, reminded me of my little brothers...I wouldn't put this past any of them! I love reading all of your stories and hope to see more soon!
~Ara |
 Sparkling Acrobat 2009-10-28 . chapter 1LOL wow, I don't think I can say anything else XD Good job! Did you really write this write posting stuff on the SKOW group? If you did: you write awfully fast. If you didn't: oh well xD -The only thing I can add is that your story is mainly in present tense (which I can never do, so: well done) but you have random little places with verbs in past tense :/ idk if it was intentional, but it looks a little weird.
Liked it, anyway :D Just out of curiosity, ever done this to somebody? XD
Cookies and Ice Cream,
~SparklingAcrobat |