I think your storys are exiting, this one I really like although it don't have one of my favorite endings, but that is just because I don't like sad endings, I cried at the end.

It has a good ending even though I don't like it and I might read this story again, 'cause it's really good.

Critique; let's see, this is written in a way that makes it like a episode in a tv-show, which isn't a bad thing, if you're looking for a book like story than maybe this isn't your style, but if you're looking for some good suspense to read than this is something to read.

I'm reading your other one now, keep up the good work. -

All I can say is "wow". This was one of the best mysteries Ive ever read. It felt like a movie. It was intense and had my heart racing. You are a very talented author, I will definitely read any sequel to this!