 Anna Christie 2009-11-01 . chapter 1This is fun! haha I like how it sorta just swings you right along.
"I saw your face, baby, walking up a stray old staircase." is my fave line.
But I think you made a mistake here:
"something I was never supposed meant to do"
It needs to be either 'supposed' or 'meant' but not both. Just thought I'd point it out, good song still though!! |