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Anna Christie 2009-11-01 . chapter 1
This is fun! haha I like how it sorta just swings you right along.

"I saw your face, baby, walking up a stray old staircase." is my fave line.

But I think you made a mistake here:

"something I was never supposed meant to do"

It needs to be either 'supposed' or 'meant' but not both. Just thought I'd point it out, good song still though!!
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