... DUDE SHE TOTALLY HAS THE HOTS FOR TANNER. AND NOT ONLY FOR HIS DICK. LOL

Laughing my ass off... seriously hilarious! I love ur way of thinking! It's awesome! hahaha wow

Freud would have a blast with this, haha ^^ Penis envy was it if I recall correctly :p

LMFAO that was so ficking hilarious. there shld b a fbook group 4 penis-lovers XD

It was actually confusing at first to see if the person talking was female or male. Lol. But still, this was good. xD Very different. ^^

-Mel's Merleawe

Haha. That was hilarious, I loved your writing style.

HA HA LOVED IT!

I saw at the top of the story that this is your first time writing in first person. I'm completely amazed! I've read stories by people who have always written in first person and couldn't have done a better job!!

I know it says on your profile that this is a one-shot but I think you should consider developing this into a full story. I think it would make an amazing story and would definitely read it, however it was still brilliant just as a one-shot.

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HOLY SH!T! THAT IS AWESOME! i was reading the beginning of it and was in awe! You Ms. Breejalil are and amazing writer

That made me laugh !
I like it !
I'm the same way ! Not so blunt about it but I love the concept of it!

Wow. that was super great! I can't think of the words to describe it but it's definitely different and so close to being word porn without getting there that I think it's amazing.

This is hilarious! I really like how you kept it light, and didn't make it too serious (because that whole Tanner thing, if told from another angle, could have been really serious-- actually it might be something to explore in a companion piece). Great work!

yay for smut~! xD loved it. :'P

Wow! You sure know how to write and keep people interested. Keep writing. I'm one of your biggest fan of your stories. Loved it. Hope to see more of your writing.

That was a pretty interesting challenge, very informative and I liked the first person.

Can't wait for FCP epi x

That was pretty awesome for a challenge one-shot. You did really well transitioning to first person.