This was so adorable x3 Seriously, you have a way with writing some emotional poetry, and it's really moving! :D With each chapter I read, my mood changes. I feel inspired :P

This would have to be one of my favourite poems by you so far. Really gorgeous. I love the idea of a person loving another ignorant of their appearance, because after all, what matters is their soul. Haha that was so lame XD This is why I don't write poetry.

So anyway, amazing poem! I thought it was really sweet -

Really nice imagery in this, only, I'm a fool and I couldn't understand what this was symbolising. Should I have? Ah well, I found it intriguing nonetheless :3

Rather haunting. But sweet, in an odd way...Does that make sense? I loved the line "Keep her smiling". This really captures the essence of the effects suicide has on both the individual and the people around her. Sad, but well written, congrats c:

I don't know which is more saddening- the fact that this has no reviews (which it deserves!) or the fact that it was such a melancholy, amazing poem! Really well done, this had a ton of emotion in it and I really enjoyed reading - I shall have to read on.