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Sapphyre Nymph 2009-11-17 . chapter 1
i loved it!!
it so nice...
sweet..
anitsirK 2009-11-08 . chapter 1
Hahahaha! That was so sweetly full of fluff and romance. So cute. Thanks for writing such a lighthearted story! It lifted my spirits. :D And made me smile. Good work.
a little girl 2009-11-03 . chapter 1
*outstanding ovation* good job good job :) hihihi
Sugar 2009-11-02 . chapter 1
Your writing is atrocious. Please give up.
RoseLife 2009-11-01 . chapter 1
so cuute
well done ^_^
i loved the ending~!
Katie Valentine 2009-11-01 . chapter 1
Realistic, I must say. They made up too easily I think (not sure why I say that pft), but I like the story anyways! :D
balloonfista 2009-11-01 . chapter 1
Aw...so cute. I have a weakness for guys like Mason.

Ri
pinkguppie 2009-10-31 . chapter 1
This is one of the cutest, sweetest oneshots I have ever read.
It was beautifully written - and I got attached to the characters very quickly. Your use of wording was fantastically done - with just the right amount of descriptions/humour etc.

Awesome oneshot :)
toffeecakesxox. 2009-10-31 . chapter 1
aww, so cute. :]
haha, i love Mason and Thaliana (and their names!)
adorable!
Brit Girl 101 2009-10-31 . chapter 1
love it!
Hazelnut Romance 2009-10-30 . chapter 1
aw. nice wat to make up!
Beautiful Destination 2009-10-30 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story! I'd like a proposal similar to Mason's :)
SunsetRainbow 2009-10-30 . chapter 1
That was so so ridiculously cutee!
annoyance 2009-10-30 . chapter 1
This was great! You did an awesome job :)

I just have one question. Mason is the one who's over enthusiastic (about work) right? Or is it Maria? I'm only asking because you didn't give Maria a nickname if she's the over-enthu person.

You can find this story in my c2. Good luck :)
~Annoyance
Ravina 2009-10-30 . chapter 1
I love it!

Just a couple of things I noticed though:
(1) Was it one week or two weeks since they split up? A paragraph near the middle starts with "two whole weeks", but ends with "outburst seven days ago".
(2) "I can get her off my mind." It's I "can't" right?

- Rebekah
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