 Sapphyre Nymph 2009-11-17 . chapter 1i loved it!!
it so nice...
sweet.. |
 anitsirK 2009-11-08 . chapter 1Hahahaha! That was so sweetly full of fluff and romance. So cute. Thanks for writing such a lighthearted story! It lifted my spirits. :D And made me smile. Good work. |
 a little girl 2009-11-03 . chapter 1*outstanding ovation* good job good job :) hihihi |
 Sugar 2009-11-02 . chapter 1 Your writing is atrocious. Please give up. |
 RoseLife 2009-11-01 . chapter 1so cuute
well done ^_^
i loved the ending~! |
 Katie Valentine 2009-11-01 . chapter 1Realistic, I must say. They made up too easily I think (not sure why I say that pft), but I like the story anyways! :D |
 balloonfista 2009-11-01 . chapter 1Aw...so cute. I have a weakness for guys like Mason.
Ri |
 pinkguppie 2009-10-31 . chapter 1This is one of the cutest, sweetest oneshots I have ever read.
It was beautifully written - and I got attached to the characters very quickly. Your use of wording was fantastically done - with just the right amount of descriptions/humour etc.
Awesome oneshot :) |
 toffeecakesxox. 2009-10-31 . chapter 1aww, so cute. :]
haha, i love Mason and Thaliana (and their names!)
adorable! |
 Brit Girl 101 2009-10-31 . chapter 1love it! |
 Hazelnut Romance 2009-10-30 . chapter 1aw. nice wat to make up! |
 Beautiful Destination 2009-10-30 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this story! I'd like a proposal similar to Mason's :) |
 SunsetRainbow 2009-10-30 . chapter 1That was so so ridiculously cutee! |
 annoyance 2009-10-30 . chapter 1This was great! You did an awesome job :)
I just have one question. Mason is the one who's over enthusiastic (about work) right? Or is it Maria? I'm only asking because you didn't give Maria a nickname if she's the over-enthu person.
You can find this story in my c2. Good luck :)
~Annoyance |
 Ravina 2009-10-30 . chapter 1I love it!
Just a couple of things I noticed though:
(1) Was it one week or two weeks since they split up? A paragraph near the middle starts with "two whole weeks", but ends with "outburst seven days ago".
(2) "I can get her off my mind." It's I "can't" right?
- Rebekah |