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DreadedFate 2009-12-09 . chapter 17
Okay, so I feel kind of stupid right now. Throughout this entire story up to this point, I thought he was a vampire. He said that he was dangerous and a murderer and that he was trying to protect her from him so I was thinking 'Oh, he's a vampire.' lol =)
animegirl214 2009-12-08 . chapter 28
oh!! Oh my gosh, Thanks SO much! for this awesome story!! :D :D :D :D :D :D
I REALLY hope there's a Sequel! ;D
ix3ninjas 2009-12-05 . chapter 2
This is really good!
I'm a bit confused though, is "college" in here supposed to mean high school or a university?
Hwesna 2009-12-05 . chapter 28
the story is amazing! it literaly moved me to tears! i wish i could write as well as you!!

Hwesna
scarletfleur 2009-12-03 . chapter 27
i reckon ethan could make a mere plaster a fashion statement! smoking...!:)

this is a really good story, well-structured, and not too gooey

fingers crossed for a sequel! x
tiktok09 2009-12-02 . chapter 28
aww i'm so sad this story is over, its DEFINITELY one of my favorite stories! haha i cant wait to read another one of your stories or maybe even a sequel...hint hint! hahaha keep up the amazing work:D
crzy-book-frk 2009-12-02 . chapter 28
This was freaking amazing i really think that you should write a sequel, son plz i really liked it
whizabeth 2009-12-02 . chapter 28
ah! it's over! im so sad! i truely loved the story! it was my favorite fictionpress!
TiggerGurl 2009-12-02 . chapter 28
Is the story over?!?! And how many pages was it? I am really cruious! I think you have a great potentiality and are pretty great with updating. I give you the best of luck :D
Crystal Red Roses 2009-12-02 . chapter 28
aw *cries* im so sad it's over but it came to a very beautiful end. As for never seeing my reviews again... well, who says i wont keep my eyes on you stories? So cute, Ethan and Ava. You really did a wonderful job. I hope to see ya on FP soon so i can hound you with more hilarious (and sometimes quite odd) reviews

With love and gratitude,
~Rebecca
CoralKay 2009-12-02 . chapter 28
your whole story was just amazing! I love that Ethan is so sweet and loyal. And good old Oliver! hahaha he cracks me up!
kellysa111 2009-12-02 . chapter 28
I liked the ending. But what happened to Hayley? Are you going to write a sequel?
whizabeth 2009-12-01 . chapter 27
it is so sad to see this story end! ah! i love it!
xoxtina46xox 2009-12-01 . chapter 27
Your story has been so.. enthralling. I truly love reading this story. Great job, I can't wait until the last chapter
Crystal Red Roses 2009-12-01 . chapter 27
the story is coming to a close, this story has been incredible and i am so glad that i have seen it for near the beginning. I hope you continue to write on Fiction Press because you truly have talent. Who knows, maybe someday ill see your name on a book. On the bright side, you don't have to see my nagging comments day, well until your next great work of literature. I hope college is going well and that seeing this review puts a smile on your face.
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