Lolololol, I just read this entire thing and thought it was hilarious. Keep up the good work (:

So I stumbled upon this story today and it seriously made my day haha. I love it! Siddharth sounds hot haha and him and Aaliyah are so cute together. =] Oh and the sheer ridiculousness of the emails makes me laugh. I'm definitely looking forward to the "date" next chapter! =D

First, I want to say a BIG sorry for my last review. I don't know what was wrong with my brain, but for some reason I thought you said Sonam started LAUGHING. (Hence the hairbrush question.) I'm such an idiot...

"Oho. Protecting him from a mass murderer like Sonam, are you?"

Man, I LOVE her traitorous brain. My little brother gave me a funny look when I started laughing.

'kind, and selfless person, who'; I don't think you need the first comma.

'building, in which Sonam said, Rehaan'; I think it would be 'building in which, Sonam said, Rehaan'.

'at me feet'; Typo - 'my'.

'it was a full'; Typo - capitalize 'it'.

'How do you come up'; 'How you come up' maybe?

Out of sheer curiosity...do you live in India? (You don't have to answer is that's too personal.) I have a couple of friends who are originally from Mumbai.

I'm loving this story more and more - yay Siddharth!

- Rebekah

P.S. Let me know if you don't want me to correct things - I'm only doing it because I like when people do it for me, but I know some people prefer to edit things later on. (I won't be offended. :D)

you really like to push siddharth round and round dont u ? :P

woah... cry babies... funtime

Lolz, soo funny.
Sorry i forgot to mention that:
As I've been living in Australia for seven years I've forgotten Hindi, and all other Indian languages.
I am Hindu, and have been to Tirapati.
Oh and i own the UGLIEST salwar kameezin the whole world. It was like 30 rupees... It's brown... and i'm brown.

Did she leave her hairbrush in her hair or something? Or maybe that's not Sonam? Hmm...update soon so I can find out!

Oh, and you should have a non-Indian message her. :P

- Rebekah

nice job. love the poem. the last line was kinda crepy though.

This story is so nice. It had a good story line and humorous as well.

Lolz, i'm indian so i love this.

I love this story! Absolutley love it! Now I'll read Coma and review that.

I'm super duper awesome, yeah?

'"Not anymore," she said.' Maybe you can change that to "no more" or something like that, because the words you use now don't feel like they work out for what Mrs. Agrawal is trying to say.

Ohh, she finally did something her brain told her to do. LOL. I can't wait for the actual romance to pop up!

(And those e-mails get creepier and creepier! :O)

- Rebekah

I'm not Indian, but I found a lot of the references absolutely hysterical since I have so many Indian friends. I love this story, it's fantastic. The emails at the bottom of each chapter fit in perfectly, especially chapter eight's. The Shah Rukh Khan one made me laugh so hard.
Keep up the good work!

lol!i am honoured milady !
absolutely hilarrious!! i was actually loling :P
im gussing u are veggie cus i totally dint like mcveggie the last time i tried it wen i was in india!
poor mahi :P
"Defective homeostasis. Hypothalamus, buck up please."
exlain please :s

** Avi gets a beautiful girl? Jeez.

Update soon!
- Rebekah