Well this was quite a strange.

I found it hard to wrap my head around. Like their was this world, and I feel as though you didn't do a very good job explaining it, so it was kind of confusing to read, but not confusing to a point where I didn't know what was going on. The story itself was very interesting. You had a lot of nice descriptions, though I would have liked for you to go a little bit deeper into Gannon's thoughts, because from what I gathered, he didn't even seem to care about getting kicked out. But I did really like the ending. It was dramatic and I liked how you revealed enough information, but not too much, so that kind of keeps the reader guessing. It was definitively worth reading :)